Today, I would like to write about
computers and the Internet, especially some benefits and disadvantages of the
Internet. The Internet are very useful,
because we can do anything by ones, for example, e-mailing with someone even if
he/she lives in the other side of the earth almost free, chatting with someone
wherever they live almost free, watching YouTube, listening to various music in
the world, Skype with anyone, Facebook, Twitter, and so on. I don’t have space to write the Internet’s benefits
and I omit.
As you know, there are many benefits, but there
are some disadvantages. For example, we
don’t know what happen on the Internet.
If you were finding a girl/boyfriend online, you would be able to tell lies
to her/him. If you told lies, the secret
wouldn’t be out until meeting. So, you
may be told lie, but you may believe her/him.
After meeting, you found that is a lie, but you may not be able to
escape. The accident may happen. In the past, there are many troubles and
cases, so we can’t say positively that the Internet is safe. In addition, we can see anything and
everything. You may see something you do
not want to.
Do you know Information gap? This refers to the gap that has arisen
between those who are not literate and literate information technology. I think some of people use computers too
much, but other should use computers more.
Computers are very useful, but we can use it too much during class and
chatting with friends. I think it is
strange and we have to use it when you are in good time and place. To be sure, computers are complex, but we are
easy to collect information. So we have
to tell those who not literate how to use computeres.
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I like instruments, so I enjoyed reading this description. However, I don't know what Kane is. Also, try to use "we" less often, and use "you" or **no subject** when you are explaining directions or how to do something.
ReplyDeleteJournal I = 280+ words = 7 APs!!
You made some good points about the dangers of the internet and the importance of becoming IT literate!
Journal J = 280+ words = 7 APs!!
Mr. W.